![]() Ione: And if we win, will be likely thanks to it as well => And if we win, it will likely be thanks to it as well (And it should be Nulkan, no?).maybe "It smells precum." or "It smells like precum." Misha: It smells to precum and there's no other smell around here. ![]() Nulkan: No more assasinnations => assassinations.Other tried to fight, but they soon fleed => fled (2 places) Nulkan: About 15 Nocverchians are there captured in cages => are there, captured in cages.Luth: When did you have intend to teach her to fight => either "When did you intend to teach her to fight" or "When were you intending to teach her to fight" (I prefer the 2nd version, past tense).to the north of Nocverchis there's the 6th Executor Something tells me he must be the one responsible => Needs an update, does not make great sense when we're going to Nocverchis from Eldrien. => As we continue, the forest progressively. Nulkan: As we continue the forest progressively.Nulkan: "leaving the Yalen border behind" => needs an update, in this case I left from Eldrien. ![]() Nulkan: It's an excellent opportunity to bolster our away from the prying eyes of Arax => "bolster our away"? Not sure what is meant by this.Dynae: his attempted casting failed to stablize => stabilize.Yraselle: I command you to stop and release my dad! => my father.Yraselle: Pyrus!! Retreat, now! and realease my dad!! I command you => release my father (typo, and "dad" is really weird in this context).Nulkan: This seems to have started at the same time as Drascys' assasination => assassination.Yraselle: Araxian influece has been like a noose => influence.Nulkan: A Political marriage? Why? Isn't that a bit outdated? => A political (lowercase P, yes I'm a nit picker).Luth: He was Drascy's right hand for many years, and something tells me he's the real force behind Drascy's assassination => Drascys' (twice).Saraith: Yes sir! => Saraith? Shouldn't this be just "soldier", or something similar?.Dynae: (after rejecting Nadine): Well, nadine told us about this => Saraith told us about this.Saraith: Even though I'm happy to see you two aren't lossing your time, heehee.Wave 3: they see Tregor running away with some of their man => with some of his men.Misha battle: I carry her and pay for her to have a room to spend the night in in another inn. ![]()
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